Hey Dom - I like the 'mosaic' style - the bit I don't like much is the suggestion that the guy at the beginning cuts himself on purpose - like he's self-harming or some lunatic; in the animatic at least, it comes off as very aggressive - and maybe it would be better to suggest the cut happens by accident? I know there's a particular tone you're going for which is that anarchic style, but there's something 'off' about the cutting scene - your thoughts?
Ok, It's not hard to change. :D
The other thing now is that I'm trying to make out some kind of interesting ending for everyything, I'm also not really happy about some sound effects and I guess I should consider if I need a voice explaining things sometimes.