tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1320330205885166658.post487963775979478324..comments2023-09-06T05:23:17.083-07:00Comments on Dom's Animation blog: Animatic in progress (adjusted)Domantashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04537408521058885177noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1320330205885166658.post-21714849306324483632011-05-08T10:28:04.945-07:002011-05-08T10:28:04.945-07:00The other thing now is that I'm trying to make...The other thing now is that I'm trying to make out some kind of interesting ending for everyything, I'm also not really happy about some sound effects and I guess I should consider if I need a voice explaining things sometimes.Domantashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04537408521058885177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1320330205885166658.post-30033845633009049502011-05-08T10:17:16.315-07:002011-05-08T10:17:16.315-07:00Ok, It's not hard to change. :DOk, It's not hard to change. :DDomantashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04537408521058885177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1320330205885166658.post-59361376761204460672011-05-08T02:22:23.133-07:002011-05-08T02:22:23.133-07:00Hey Dom - I like the 'mosaic' style - the ...Hey Dom - I like the 'mosaic' style - the bit I don't like much is the suggestion that the guy at the beginning cuts himself on purpose - like he's self-harming or some lunatic; in the animatic at least, it comes off as very aggressive - and maybe it would be better to suggest the cut happens by accident? I know there's a particular tone you're going for which is that anarchic style, but there's something 'off' about the cutting scene - your thoughts?tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com